Current Giveaways
Upcoming Agent Spotlight Interviews & Guest Posts
- Carey Blankenship-Kramer Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 4/21/2025
- Rebecca Eskildsen Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 4/23/2025
- Analía Cabello Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 5/14/2025
- Isabel Lineberry Agent Spotlight Interview and Query Critique Giveaway on 5/21/2025
Agent Spotlight & Agent Spotlight Updates
- Agent Spotlights & Interviews were all edited in 2021. Every year since then, I update some of them. I also regularly add information regarding changes in their agency as I find it. I have been updated through the letter "N" as of 1/26/2024 and many have been reviewed by the agents. Look for more information as I find the time to update more agent spotlights.
Rain Drops on Roses Giveaway Hop
Debut Author Interview: Mia Araujo and Afia In the Land of Wonders Giveaway
Happy Monday Everyone! Today I’m excited
to have Mia Araujo here to share about her middle grade fantasy Afia In the
Land of Wonders. It sounds like a fantastic story inspired by West African
kingdoms and has gorgeous illustrations. I’m looking forward to reading it.
In her
stunning literary debut, Mia Araujo presents a gorgeous reimagining of Alice's
Adventures in Wonderland, spinning a new story that is accompanied by
arresting, ethereal illustrations about twin sisters and how one must venture
outside the safety of their home, into the wilderness, in order to find herself
and true happiness.
Afia has always felt like half of a whole. Her
twin sister, Aya, is perfectly happy with fulfilling their family's
expectations of them. But Afia dreams of exploring the world beyond her
secluded cliffside home of Dafra. She dreams of adventure.
When she meets a charming shape-shifter named
Bakame, who dazzles her with promises of a magical land called Ijabu, Afia
decides to take her destiny into her own hands. Although it will mean leaving
everything she has ever known behind, including her beloved sister, Afia
follows Bakame into the forbidden forests surrounding Dafra, from which no one
has ever returned.
Filled with magical sights, a charismatic Queen
and her intriguing court, Ijabu is everything that Afia has ever dreamed of.
But she soon discovers that nothing is as it seems, and this fantasy world
demands a terrible price. With the help of a mysterious trickster, Afia must
evade the Queen's hunters and the lost dreamers of Ijabu, who wish to pull her
deeper into their web.
Now, Afia must find the courage to survive while
standing on her own--or risking losing herself completely to the wonders of
Ijabu.
Debut author-illustrator Mia Araujo weaves an
extraordinarily luminous and beautiful story, inspired by Lewis Carroll's
Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, about what it takes to find your true self,
even if it means facing your deepest fears.
"Nothing short of an amazing adventure into
a fantastic world, Mia Araujo has crafted a beautiful narrative, made all the
more incredible by stunning visuals that overflow with heart and soul." --
David F. Walker, Eisner-award winning author of Bitter Root and The Second
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Hi Mia!
Thanks so much for joining us.
1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer.
I’m an Argentine American artist and first-time author born and raised in southern California. Since 2007, I’ve exhibited my artwork in galleries, museums, and conventions and have done professional illustration for newspapers and books, including Silvia Moreno Garcia’s Mexican Gothic and Gabe Cole Novoa’s The Wicked Bargain. I also co-host Painted in Color, a BIPOC art podcast on YouTube with my friends, Lauren Brown and Eric Wilkerson.
I’ve been obsessed with drawing ever since I was a little kid. When I was 8 years old, I remember telling the class on my first career day that I wanted to be an artist and an author when I grew up.
I majored in Illustration and minored in Creative Writing at Otis College of Art and Design in 2007, but I stopped writing for years after graduating because I was suddenly afraid that I wasn’t any good at writing and that I had to figure myself out before I could write. So for years, I focused all of my creative energy on my paintings and drawings. I finally came back to writing again in 2012, when I started the project that would become this book.
2. Where did you get the idea for Afia In the Land of Wonders?
Lewis Carroll’s Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland is one of my favorite books from my childhood and I’ve wanted to reimagine my own version for years.
My twin sister, Barbra, and I grew up inseparable, so when I moved out and left home for the first time, it was really hard living apart from her. I felt lost without her and like I had to figure out who I was on my own, so I decided to write her this story as a way to reconnect with her.
Your Writing Process
3. Your story is based on West African kingdoms. What research did you do to create your fantasy world and how did it affect your world building process?
Most of the fantasy books I grew up with were set in European worlds or fantasy versions of them and I
never questioned that. But after taking an African Art History class in art school and learning about the great West African kingdoms of the 10th-16th centuries, I desperately wanted to see more fantasy stories inspired by them. My way of paying homage to these kingdoms was to create the fantasy world in this book. It’s a reflection of my admiration for the people who lived there and who made the art that inspired me so much.
Since this is my first attempt at fantasy world-building, I wanted to educate myself as much as possible on the inspiration for the world of Djiombé—the Saharan trade routes that connected the African continent with the rest of the world at that time, the lavish kingdoms of Ghana, Mali, and Songhai, the libraries, universities, and learning centers of Djenné and Timbuktu. I looked to the writings of Ibn Battūta, who wrote some of the only first-hand accounts still available to us today of everyday life in these kingdoms. I also read West African stories to balance out the European influence of the fantasy stories of my childhood. I didn’t want to link too strongly to any real world culture, so I used a range of influences for the setting of the story.
4. You started writing Afia In the Land of Wonders in 2012.
Share about what your writing process was like and how it evolved over the time
you wrote and revised your story.
This story went through a lot of evolutions since 2012, but I didn’t truly start writing a draft until 2017. Up until then, I was mostly focused on figuring out who the characters were, what they wanted, the world-building, and how the story would look visually. I was also working service industry jobs 40-60 hours a week during those days, so I really only got to work on this story part-time.
My writing process usually starts with scribbling notes, making word lists, using index cards, and trying to find patterns and connections between all the pieces of the story. I always turn to drawing, reading, and research when I hit a dead-end. I incubated my writing until about 2020, which is when I finally felt safe enough to start asking for feedback. It’s super important to find people who you feel safe sharing early drafts with, but who will also be honest about what you need to improve.
The initial manuscript was finally finished in May 2022 and I revised it as much as I could until I submitted the final in January 2024. Having a few months away from my manuscript at a time while I waited for my editor’s notes actually helped me feel less precious about making changes.
But despite all the evolutions, from the very beginning, I
knew exactly how I wanted the story to end because I knew where I wanted my
main character to end up. So Afia’s emotional arc has been my compass
throughout the twists and turns of the writing process.
5. Afia In the Land of Wonders is an Alice in
Wonderland retelling. How did you keep some elements of this fairytale while
making your story unique? What advice do you have for writers wanting to write
a retelling?
In the beginning I was staying as close as possible to the original story because I was really nervous about doing a whole reimagining of my own. I didn’t have any faith in my ability to write a compelling story. During the pandemic, I had my first chunk of time to really sit with the story and realized that I needed to be bolder in my reimagining. And I’m so glad I did that—the characters all take inspiration from Lewis Carroll’s cast, but they are their own characters and have evolved beyond what I imagined back in 2012. I also make references to iconic scenes and details from the original story, like the mad tea party, the “eat me” cakes and “drink me” bottles, the trial, etc but I only used details that fit into this world and story.
My advice to anyone wanting to reimagine a beloved story (if you’re anxious like me) would be to set aside your imposter syndrome or intimidation of the original work! Find that personal connection to the story—who are you writing this for and why? That emotional core is what will make your reimagining truly yours, no matter how many times it’s been retold by other writers. And of course, listen to your characters and let them take you where they need to go—that’s the most fun part of the process for me.
Your Journey to Publication
6. When did you start querying this book? How did you know you were ready to start querying?
My journey was a bit different, since I started with the artwork before I ever got to the manuscript. For years while I was working my day job as a server, I exhibited the concept art for this project at comic conventions and shows like Emerald City Comic Con, WonderCon, and GenCon to see if anyone else would be interested. The people I met in person at these shows would follow me on social media, join my mailing list, or Patreon afterward, and a lot of them have been watching this project develop and have been supporting me for years—I really owe a lot to their enthusiasm and encouragement.
When the pandemic hit, I was deep in the outline stage of my manuscript when one of my paintings went viral on social media. That’s actually how I met my agent, Regina Brooks from Serendipity Literary, who helped me go straight into the submission process.
7. It's cool how you met Regina Brooks. How did she become your agent and what was your road to publication like?
Regina asked me to write two sample chapters before she agreed to represent me. From that first conversation, I felt a connection with her—she understood what I was trying to do and believed 100% in making a full-color illustrated novel as a debut, even when other people were telling me that no publisher would pick it up unless it was in black and white.
We went on submission in November 2021 with the first 7 chapters and some sample artwork. Regina worked very hard to find the right home for my book. Even though we had several rejections, Scholastic was the perfect fit. Like Regina, they were on board with a full-color illustrated novel. Regina has been there every step of the way for me, giving me feedback on the manuscript and edits, answering my emails and phone calls even after incredibly long days. She really is the best, most hard-working agent I could hope for! And shout-out to her assistant Emma Loy-Santelli and social media manager Scott Richmond, who have both been incredible too.
8. You’re also a very talented artist and illustrated Afia in the Land of Wonders. Did you also design your gorgeous cover? How has it been working with your publisher on edits for your book and the illustrations?
Thank you so much! Yes, I painted the wraparound cover art in acrylics and created the spine art, but the rest of the design is by my amazing book designer, Omou Barry. I feel extraordinarily lucky to have gotten such an amazing team on this book. Designing and laying out an illustrated novel like this is no small feat, and I had a very specific vision for what I wanted, but my designer Omou, creative director Elizabeth Parisi, and editor Lisa Sandell did an incredible job and went beyond what I could’ve imagined. Lisa was a fantastic editor, and was super kind and patient as this was all new for me—she understood what I wanted to do with the story and everything she suggested was in full support of that.
The most challenging part of the whole process for me was
trying to finish the manuscript and creating 30 acrylic illustrations and 20
pencil drawings in 2 years….but the publisher was kind enough to bump the
release from Fall 2024 to Spring 2025 so that I wouldn’t have to rush any of
it. I really couldn’t have asked for a better experience or team as a
first-time author.
Promoting Your Book
9. How are you planning to celebrate your book’s release and promote it?
My favorite local bookstore, Arvida Book Co. in Tustin, CA is
hosting a launch event for my friends and family on my publication day. I can’t
wait to celebrate with everyone who has had to hear me talk about this book for
so long and who has supported me and cheered me on the entire time. It’s going
to be very emotional to have them there with me on that day!
10. As an artist, some of your clients are Penguin Random House, HBO, Wizards of the Coast, Imagine FX, and the Washington Post. Are any of your connections with them or others in the art world helping you spread the word about your book? Did you learn anything from working with them that is helping you as an author?
Not those clients specifically, but I am still in touch with artists from my gallery days, coworkers from my service industry jobs, fellow illustrators and artists from the years I exhibited at conventions, and former instructors and classmates from college too. I’m lucky to have met so many incredible people throughout my career and many of them have already been helping me get the word out for my book, which I’m super grateful for.
Each one of those stages of my life helped me tremendously—waiting tables forced me out of my shyness of talking to strangers and the people-watching there gave me lots of ideas. Working a convention booth helped me learn how to talk to people about my art and to practice pitching what my stories are about. All of these bits and pieces of my life inspired my work but also helped me improve at presenting it and myself professionally.
11. What are you working on now?
I have several story ideas I’m working on now—a couple of picture books, some middle grade stories, and a middle grade series that I’m especially excited about, but it’s too early to share. All illustrated, of course! As labor-intensive as this book was, I really do love using pictures and words together to tell my stories and would love to create as many stories like this as possible. For anyone who’s curious to follow the process or to get the first peek at future stories, feel free to join my mailing list or Patreon page.
Thank you so much for having me, Natalie!
Thanks for sharing all your advice, Mia. You can find Mia at:
Mia’s publisher is generously offering a hardback of Afia In the Land of Wonders for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by April 26th. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.
If you mention this contest on
Twitter, Facebook, or other social media sites and/or follow me on Twitter or
follow Alby on their social media sites, mention this in the comments, and I'll
give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter.
This book giveaway is U.S.
Marvelous Middle Grade Monday is hosted by Greg Pattridge. You can find the participating blogs on his blog.
Upcoming
Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops
Monday, April 21st I have an agent
spotlight interview with Carey Blankenship-Kramer and
a query critique giveaway
Wednesday, April 23rd I have an agent spotlight interview with Rebecca Eskildsen and a query critique giveaway
Monday, April 28th I have an interview with debut author Alby Williams and a giveaway of their MG Where There Be Monsters
Thursday, May 1st I’m participating in the Come What May Giveaway Hop
Monday, May 5th I have a guest post by author Donna Galanti and a $50 Barnes & Noble Gift Card giveaway to celebrate the release of her MG Loon Cove Cover
Wednesday, May 7th I have an interview with author Aimee Phan and a giveaway of her YA The Lost Queen and my IWSG post
I hope to see you on Wednesday!
Literary Agent Interview: Esty Loveing-Downes Interview and Query Critique Giveaway
Today I’m thrilled to have agent Esty Loveing-Downes here. She’s an associate agent at Arthouse Literary Agency.
About Esty:
1. Tell us how you became an agent, how long you’ve been one, and what you’ve been doing as an agent.
In 2020, I began interning at Jean V. Naggar Literary Agency and fell in love with the behind-the-scenes world of books. Learning the ropes at JVNLA, and then at Tobias Literary Agency, respectively, my passion for championing authors grew, and once I landed at ArtHouse, I was thrilled to become at agent in 2023. Now, I spend time editing manuscripts alongside my talented clients, meeting with editors, and learning from my colleagues at ArtHouse as well as in the larger agent community as a member of the AALA membership committee. So far, I’ve sold nine books ranging from picture books to YA and adult romance, and beyond, and I’m just getting started.
About the Agency:
2. Share a bit about your agency and what it offers to its authors.
ArtHouse Literary focuses on spotlighting “bold, diverse voices” and working to help our clients achieve their goals for their individual careers. As a boutique agency, we work hard as a team to move quickly and with purpose, and to do so in a like-minded manner. It’s a very collegial, warm community.
3. What age groups do you represent—picture books, MG, and/or YA? What genres do you represent and what are you looking for in submissions for these genres?
I represent picture book, MG, and YA titles, as well as adult fantasy, romance, and upmarket works. In each genre, I’m looking for unapologetic storytelling with an eye towards craft, underrepresented voices and perspectives, and above all, love in any of its beautiful forms.
4. Is there anything you would be especially excited to seeing in the genres you are interested in?
In MG, I love a shorter word count with a water-tight plot and a ticking clock to race. I’m not the best agent for high fantasy in either YA or adult genres, but I swoon over the coziest, grounded fantasy with magical sprinkles in appealing settings like tea shops and kitten rescues. In picture books, I’m looking for unique premises outside of baking or school-related concepts. And in romance, I’m still hunting for another LGBTQ+ story to fall in love with.
What She Isn’t Looking For:
horror, thrillers, erotica, police/legal procedurals, mysteries, anything ageist/ableist/racist/misogynistic, or anything where queer people die in the end
5. What types of submissions are you not interested in?
6. What is your philosophy as an agent both in terms of the authors you want to work with and the books you want to represent?
Editorial Agent:
7. Are you an editorial agent? If so, what is your process like when you’re working with your authors before submitting to editors?
Yes! When reading client work, I try to emulate the average Goodreads commenter who will one day ask the story to meet their expectations. I ask questions of a manuscript such as: Does this story have a beginning, middle, and satisfying ending? Does it have the right number of characters, and does it show enough vs. tell? Does the plot force the protagonist to change, and does it then make sense and finally resolve? Is the language compelling and artful? Does it meet genre reader expectations? And finally, is this material in any way problematic? Then, I share a (lengthy) editorial letter addressing my findings and asking the client to trust their brain and surprise us both with some solutions. And, I have found, they always, always do. Magically.
Query Methods and Submission Guidelines: (Always verify before submitting)
8. How should authors query you and what do you want to see with the query letter?
I can be found at ArtHouse with this link:
9. Do you have any specific dislikes in query letters or the first pages submitted to you?
I love exposition but my eyes will never skim dialogue, and very often, dialogue either merely bookends the first chapter’s opening and ending or begins somewhere around the sixth page. By then I’m hungry to be immersed and hoping to be perched right on the character’s shoulder for authenticity.
Response Time:
10. What’s your response time to queries and requests for more pages of a manuscript?
Right now, I’m considering manuscripts from Feb 2025, and I try to hold myself to a three-month window of consideration for full manuscripts.
Self-Published and Small Press Authors:
11. Are you open to representing authors who have self-published or been published by smaller presses? What advice do you have for them if they want to try to find an agent to represent them?
Yes! Compelling storytelling that deserves a wider audience deserves an agent bridging the gap.
Clients:
12. Who are some of the authors you represent?
Jen Michalski, Melinda Gong, Igor Belogolovsky, Ryan Rae Harbuck, Mowa Badmos, Jen Fier Jasinski, Melanie Pierce
Interviews and Guest Posts:
13. Please share the links to any interviews, guest posts, and podcasts you think would be helpful to writers interested in querying you.
N/a
Links and Contact Info:
14. Please share how writers should contact you to submit a query and your links on the Web.
Additional Advice:
15. Is there any other advice you’d like to share with aspiring authors that we haven’t covered?
Esty is generously offering a query critique to one lucky winner. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment through April 19th. If I do not have your email (I can no longer get it from your Google Profile), you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address. If you do not want to enter the contest, that’s okay. Just let me know in the comments.
Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops
Wednesday, April 16th I’m participating in the Raindrop in Roses Giveaway Hop
Monday, April 21st I have an agent spotlight interview with Carey Blankenship-Kramer and a query critique giveaway
Wednesday, April 23rd I have an agent spotlight interview with Rebecca Eskildsen and a query critique giveaway
Monday, April 28th I have an interview with debut author Alby Williams and a giveaway of their MG Where There Be Monsters
I hope to see you on Monday!
Debut Author Interview: Lucia Damisa and Amazon Gift Card Giveaway and IWSG Post
Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have debut author Lucia Damisa here to share about her YA Fantasy, A Desert of Bleeding Sand. I follow Lucia’s blog Path to Publication, which is a great resource full of advice from writers and agent interviews. I’m excited to watch her become a debut author. I really enjoy fantasy historical stories, and I’m looking forward to starting Lucia’s series.
Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:
In this inventive fantasy debut perfect for fans of Dance of Thieves and The City of Brass, West African Mr & Mrs Smith collide in a magical desert palace.
Mercenaries are raiding academies and taking students. A traitor in the palace might be the mercenaries’ source of intel. Zair, a half-aziza and elite military student, is sent to infiltrate the coronation ceremony under disguise to find the traitor. Zair is desperate to succeed and save her little sister from the mercenaries, and maybe also prove worthy of the elite soldiers’ badge, despite the hatred against her tribe and their magical abilities. But then she encounters Dathan, a clever rival spy also after the traitor for intentions unknown.
A threat to each other’s goals, Zair and Dathan begin working against each other in a game of wits, desperate to find the traitor first while avoiding the consequences of spying in the sentient palace. When courtiers start to turn up dead, however, both realize their individual skills might be no match for the traitor’s. In a glittering Sahara Desert palace where hunger is for power and night magic guards its halls, Zair and Dathan must team up to find the kingdom’s greatest traitor, or watch everything they love burn.
Before we get to Lucia’s interview, I have my IWSG Post.
Posting: The first Wednesday is officially Insecure Writer's Support Group Day.
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!
The awesome co-hosts this month are: Jennifer Lane, L Diane Wolfe, Jenni Dorner, and me!
Optional Question: What fantasy character would you like to fight, or go on a quest with, or have a beer/glass of wine with?
I’d pick two characters from fantasy stories and two from contemporary favorites. My fantasy choices are Raisa in The Demon King by Cinda Williams Chima and Sage from The False Prince by Jennifer Nielsen. Both are memorable characters who are underdogs fighting to save their kingdoms and are written by some of my favorite authors. My contemporary choices are Mia from The Front Desk and Lina in Finally Seen, both by Kelly Yang. These are immigrant middle graders fighting to make a better life for their family, friends, and community. Kelly Yang is another favorite author of mine, who is an incredibly inspiring person.
Interview With Lucia Damisa
Hi Lucia! Thanks so much for joining us.
1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer.
Hi everyone! My name is Lucia Damisa and I’m the author of A DESERT OF BLEEDING SAND. I’ve been reading author interviews on Literary Rambles since I started this wild ride to publication four years ago, so it’s a full circle moment to be here as an author! I’ve been writing full-length novels since I was thirteen. Back then, I was in an Air Force boarding school and there wasn’t much to fill our free time. So I started writing and would dedicate a notebook to a particular story, fill it up with ink, and then my friends would read and chat about them. I had to stop writing in college and while I served in the Naval Headquarters because of time, and writing became a thing
I ‘used to do years ago’. But after my service, I started freelancing as a lifestyle writer and found myself with lots of time to spare. I picked up writing books again and literally couldn’t stop pouring out story after story for a year. I then found out that even continents away, you could get published, and being an author became a dream of mine!
2. Where did you get the idea for A Desert of Bleeding Sand?
The seed for A DESERT OF BLEEDING SAND came when I read my first rivals-to-more fantasy book. I’d known of enemies-to-more, but that book introduced me to a perspective where the characters don’t quite hate each other but challenge and need to beat each other. I was captivated and wanted to explore the sabotage, and angst, and urgency of the trope. But I had no plot or setting to place the characters. Shortly after, the elections took place in my country and we started to hear of terrorists going to schools to abduct dozens of students for ransom. From toddlers in kindergarten to college students, no age group was spared. It was reminiscent of the abduction of over 100 girls from a school in 2014 that led to the Bring Back Our Girls movement. I felt crushed and helpless; these were my mates. It could’ve been me or my siblings. I needed a way to speak out. To speak up for us. So I took these characters I’d had in my head for months and started to write this satire-like story where the youths could actually do something. Where Dathan and Zair could go to the head of leadership and fight to free their mates. It’s a book that tries to hold up a mirror and show the ways a country can fail its youths, while helping my peers feel seen in my small way.
Your Writing Process
3. That’s an inspiring way to come up with a story idea. What was your world-building process like? How did the fact that the setting is a desert impact the world you created?
World building is one of my favorite parts of writing because it takes me from the little corner by my bed where I write to grand worlds! I wanted to explore a desert setting in this book because prior, I’d explored mountains and rivers and forests. However, it was tricky for a historical fantasy since Nigeria doesn’t have large deserts. But I do live in the north, which has desert-like terrain, and I scraped and scoured until I found an article that said the Sahara Desert—which I’ve always been enthralled by—might extend to Nigeria in a few decades. I was delighted that it wasn’t farfetched to link Nigeria with the Sahara Desert, so I ran with it! It’s definitely been a change but I love exploring a desert setting.
Also, the main kingdom in A DESERT OF BLEEDING SAND is inspired by Nigeria’s tribal structure, but while my country has hundreds of beautiful tribes, I drew from many of them to create five tribes in my book, to highlight how tribalism can also stunt a nation’s progress. Externally, Nigeria also faced colonialism and slavery decades ago, and so I built the other kingdoms in the book from the historical versions of nations that colonized Nigeria, both for ‘history lessons’ and also to explore what happens after nations break free of colonial rule. Do they get their stuff together and go on to thrive? Or do the leaders drop the ball so the land fares worse?
Other inspiration came from Nigerian and African mythology such as the azizas (African fae) from Dahomey, and some of my favorite Biblical stories!
4. Your world building is so cool. A Desert of Bleeding Sand is part of a five-book series. How did you plot it out and how much of the rest of the series have you plotted out? What advice do you have for writers wanting to write a series?
I’m an outliner who loves to intertwine subplots in my series, so immediately after I finished the first book, I started drafting the second. At the time, I didn’t even have an agent yet, much less a book deal! But my goal when I start writing is to complete my characters’ arc. After writing book one, I made these detailed outlines of about 30-50k words for the subsequent books in the series. By the time I finished book 2, I signed with an agent, and then I wrote book 3 while book 1 went on submission. After book 3 finished, I was unable to process being done. I couldn’t say goodbye to the series I loved so much! I was delighted when a new idea for the series came—an idea that stretched into two more books. So it was a wild timeline that spanned two years with me writing the first three (and a half) books without the guarantee of a book deal, and then finishing book four after I signed with my publishers. I’m yet to write book 5, the epic finale, but I have finished outlining it!
My advice is rather unusual: you don’t have to wait until you sign a book deal to draft or plot out your sequels. I know of writers who waited to sign a deal first and got so overwhelmed with the pressures of publishing that writing the next book was like pulling teeth. Or some who couldn’t go back to book one to make changes, or open threads to explore in subsequent books because book one was way past tweaking by the time they started writing book two/three. Some of my best series have big reveals in book three that had been foreshadowed in book one, chapter five. And you can’t do that if you haven’t planned well in advance.
5 How has your story improved through working on edits with your agent and editor? What did you learn about improving your writing from the process?
It’s improved in a major way. In its two-three years before publication, ADOBS underwent rigorous revision. I’m an ‘overwriter’ and my agent at the time was brilliant; she helped me whittle down all the fluff to reveal the heart of the story. We actually trimmed over 12k words of the manuscript! She also guided me in enhancing the emotional and magical areas of the book. By the time we finished revisions, it felt like we’d run a marathon, but I was so happy with the result. I thought the book was pretty much ready after the edit with my agent. Ha. By the time I got to work with my editors, I was shocked by just how much work there was left to do! I was lucky that my book’s structure was sound from the jump, but when you decide to write about military students who are also spies and with a world building as vast, there’s a lot of deep diving needed to make things grounded. My editor was brilliant and helped me with this aspect!
I learned (again) that feedback is super important, especially from people who share your vision for the story.
Your Road to Publication
6. You have a five-book publishing deal, which is rare, especially for debut authors. What was going on submission like and how did you get such a big commitment from your publisher?
Great question! My publishers wanted six books from me from the jump, but as I explained earlier, I initially planned for the series to be a trilogy. Afterward, I had an idea for two more books. I didn’t have an idea for a sixth book (back then), and we decided to sign a five-book series. My publishers are of the belief that when readers love characters, they want to follow them on a long journey across multiple books. So I didn’t have to coax or convince my publishers to sign a pentalogy as I’d feared I would; I’m blessed that it’s what they wanted from the jump.
About going on submissions, it’s one of the most difficult experiences I’ve had! You think querying is tough, and then you go on submissions and querying starts to seem easier. (It’s not.) A DESERT OF BLEEDING SAND got a lot of interests both during querying and on submissions. But unlike querying which ended with three offers of representation, on submissions, the interested editors couldn’t quite get their entire team on board. I was lucky that about six months in, my publishers reached out to me about my book, but I wanted to explore all my options, so I asked for time to decide. I had their offer at the back of my mind through the highs and lows of submissions. After a while, I decided to pull my book out of the submission trenches, rather than proceed on to Adult editors, and accepted my publisher’s offer!
7. What are your tips for working with a publisher without an agent?
Another great question! My tip is to insist on being in the know. When you have an agent, your agent is who you go to with questions about the publisher’s decisions, and this makes it easier to express concerns or disapproval—because there is a mediator. Without an agent, you might be less willing to ask your publishing team questions. But it’s important that you make it clear to your team from the jump that you’re going to ask questions about things you don’t understand or didn’t expect, and that you want to be kept abreast on as many things as possible. Make sure there is an open line of communication. If they refuse, then you might want to reconsider taking the offer!
Promoting Your Book
8. How have you been promoting your book before it was published and what are your plans now that your book has been published?
Since I live a continent away from the hub of publishing, I’m so thankful for the internet that connects readers and writers all over the world. It’s been my biggest marketing tool. I found members for my wonderful street team, the Desert Stargazers, on social media, and they’ve been priceless in sparking excitement for my book. I also enjoy posting ADOBS’ teasers in bookish spaces, and hearing from podcasts and magazines that want to feature me. Now that my book is out, my publishers will keep shouldering most of the technicalities of marketing, but I plan to keep doing what I’ve been to also get word out of the other books in the series!
9. Share about your blog, Path to Publication, and how it can help writers.
When I started on my journey to publication, I devoured everything I could on the publishing world. I especially loved to read old blog posts and interviews of successful authors to see their journeys to publication almost in ‘real time’. I learned a lot. By the time I signed with my first agent, I didn’t want to discard all I’d learned about querying. I decided to start a website where I shared all of this information in an environment that felt welcoming, warm, and even fun. I found other writers who were interested in uplifting fellow writers, and we shared lessons learned firsthand from querying, signing with an agent, going on submission, debuting, etc. The contributors come from different countries of the world, and write in various genres/age groups from picture books to romance to fantasy, mystery and more.
My goal is for writers who subscribe to Path2pub or read our posts to not feel isolated in their journeys, but have a resource that also feels like learning from friends. Recently this year, we held our first pitch event (#P2Ppit) on X and Bluesky, and helped connect writers with literary agents while also celebrating writing.
10. What are you working on now?
I took a brief detour from writing the A DESERT OF BLEEDING SAND series to work on another idea. Drafting it went much faster than I anticipated (114k words in one month, at?) so amid revisions for the ADOBS series, I’m preparing to write the grand finale, book 5.
Thanks for sharing all your advice, Lucia. You can find Lucia at Tiktok, Instagram, Goodreads
Giveaway Details
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Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops
Monday, April 7th I have an agent spotlight interview with Etsy Loveing-Downes and a query critique giveaway
Monday, April 14th I have an interview with author Mia Araujo and a giveaway of her MG Afia In the Land of Wonders
Wednesday, April 16th I’m participating in the Raindrop in Roses Giveaway Hop
Monday, April 21st I have an agent spotlight interview with Carey Blankenship-Kramer and a query critique giveaway
Wednesday, April 23rd I have an agent spotlight interview with Rebecca Eskildsen and a query critique giveaway
Monday, April 28th I have an interview with debut author Alby Williams and a giveaway of their MG Where There Be Monsters
I hope to see you on Monday!
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